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On spring break this semester, I don’t have time to really enjoy it as a break because I have a lot of home work! The difference is just I don’t have to get up early and drive to the school. However, spring break already past and I have to get ready for quiz and test!

Actually not too bad either because while you on break, you feel more relax and do not rushing in doing your home work. For the english class, I have been reading “Into The Wild” It’s very interesting book and worthy to read. Eventhough I don’t understand why a young man from a wealthy family would abandon everything and living like that.

So…nothing special in this spring break!!!

I find this reading very interesting and I enjoyed reading it. It’s true that if we know what our purpose of living, it will make our life so much more meaning. Hence, it make us live more happily. 

What is your topic or the problem you hope to address?

my topic in this essay would be about ocean pollution. Ocean pollution is big problem that affected our environment and our health.

What do you think will work as a solution? This issue is a big problem and it’s not easy to solve this problem. However, there are some way that I think we can do to  help protect the ocean, such as: by recycling , not dump any harmful material to the ocean, carpooling if possible because smoke from car are polluted the ocean through acid rain.

What personal experiences can you use to develop your essay and support your claims?

I realize that today we can barely eat seafood because of many seafood are contaminated and could endanger our health, especially those who are pregnant. Most doctor are recommended to pregnant women to avoid seafood because chemical contain in seafood can cause a birth defect. 

Which texts might help you develop your essay and provide evidence for your claims?

Mostly I get the information through internet research.

Who is your audience? (Who do you want to convince to take what action about which problem?)

parents and college students.